I
started mentoring beginning writers about a year ago, and it has been an
incredibly rewarding experience. I was looking for a volunteer opportunity and
starting investigating writer’s groups in my area (South Florida). Almost
exclusively, they were structured as group critique situations, which didn’t
make much sense to me: if you’re a beginner, I don’t believe you’re going to
benefit much from the advice of other beginners.
What
I ended up doing was working with an established writer’s group, and creating a
Meetup tailored to the mentoring concept. Participants send me work ahead of
time via email, and they receive an intensive one-on-one critique at the
session. We get together an average of twice each month, and have attracted
aspiring writers ranging from poets to novelists to creators of children’s
books.
A
number of consistent patterns have emerged. Most of the people who show up are
beginners with terrific ideas and sloppy executions. Many of them haven’t
studied formally and lack training in grammar, sentence structure and point of
view. A great many of them are hampered by time constraints (either job or
family) that limit the amount of time they can focus on writing. The most
common scenario, unfortunately, is that talented people tend to stop coming
when they realize how difficult it really is to become a writer.
The
question I invariably end up asking them is whether they are writing to express
themselves, or whether their goal is to have other people read their work.
Either course of action is fine. Whether someone is writing for therapy or
whether they really want to go the distance, my role is the same: I want to
help them learn the craft and find their own voice.
Probably
the most disturbing trend I’ve noticed is the current reliance on self-publishing.
It turns into a shortcut for many people, a way of avoiding putting in the
effort to make a piece of work as good as it can be. Rather than agonize and
slave over it until it’s perfect, they pay Joe the printer to print it for
them. This is a workable solution for some people (a person who wants to record
their memoir for their children and grandchildren, for example), but for
someone who really wants to be a writer it can short-circuit their career.
Now, some info about the novel, Friend of the Devil. Btw, Mark is giving away a $50 Amazon/BN gift card to a randomly chosen reader. So don't forget to leave a comment via rafflecopter. Here's the link: http://www.rafflecopter.com/rafl/display/28e4345f1710
Blurb:
In
1990 some critics believe that America’s most celebrated chef, Joseph Soderini
di Avenzano, cut a deal with the Devil to achieve fame and fortune. Whether he
is actually Bocuse or Beelzebub, Avenzano is approaching the 25th anniversary
of his glittering Palm Beach restaurant, Chateau de la Mer, patterned after the
Michelin-starred palaces of Europe.
Journalist David Fox arrives in Palm Beach to interview the chef for a story on the restaurant’s silver jubilee. He quickly becomes involved with Chateau de la Mer’s hostess, unwittingly transforming himself into a romantic rival of Avenzano. The chef invites Fox to winter in Florida and write his authorized biography. David gradually becomes sucked into the restaurant’s vortex: shipments of cocaine coming up from the Caribbean; the Mafia connections and unexplained murder of the chef’s original partner; the chef’s ravenous ex-wives, swirling in the background like a hidden coven. As his lover plots the demise of the chef, Fox tries to sort out hallucination and reality while Avenzano treats him like a feline’s catnip-stuffed toy.
Journalist David Fox arrives in Palm Beach to interview the chef for a story on the restaurant’s silver jubilee. He quickly becomes involved with Chateau de la Mer’s hostess, unwittingly transforming himself into a romantic rival of Avenzano. The chef invites Fox to winter in Florida and write his authorized biography. David gradually becomes sucked into the restaurant’s vortex: shipments of cocaine coming up from the Caribbean; the Mafia connections and unexplained murder of the chef’s original partner; the chef’s ravenous ex-wives, swirling in the background like a hidden coven. As his lover plots the demise of the chef, Fox tries to sort out hallucination and reality while Avenzano treats him like a feline’s catnip-stuffed toy.
Excerpt
Several years after the opening of
Chateau de la Mer, the triumvirate of Avenzano, Walsh and Ross appeared to be
one big happy family, although there were rumors of strains in the
relationship. One night, at the height of the Festival of Champagne, there was
an incident. Ross, a notorious womanizer, was sipping Cristal with a redhead at
the restaurant’s corner table. His wife slipped through the front door of the
mansion, unannounced. Walking slowly through the dining room, past the Medieval
memorabilia and dramatic cast-iron griffins, she strolled up to Ross’s table,
took a revolver from her evening bag, and calmly shot him through the heart.
The ensuing chaos did more to
establish Joseph Soderini di Avenzano in the American imagination than his
designer pasta, his Bedouin-stuffed poussin, his recipes transposed from
Etruscan or Old Genoese, or his library of 10,000 cookbooks. This was more than
a good meal, after all. This was sex and death in Palm Beach. Even more
intriguing was the Chef’s refusal to comment on Ross after his death, except
for informal and effusive eulogies in his famous baritone.
“Watch that Cristal,” David’s friend
Bill Grimaldi told him before he left Manhattan to do an assigned story on the
25th anniversary of Chateau de la Mer. “It’s a killer.”
Author bio and info
Mark
Spivak is an award-winning writer specializing in wine, spirits, food,
restaurants and culinary travel. He was the wine writer for the Palm Beach Post
from 1994-1999, and was honored by the Academy of Wine Communications for
excellence in wine coverage “in a graceful and approachable style.” Since 2001
has been the Wine and Spirits Editor for the Palm Beach Media Group; his
running commentary on the world of food, wine and spirits is available at the
Global Gourmet blog on www.palmbeachillustrated.com. He is the holder of the
Certificate and Advanced diplomas from the Court of Master Sommeliers.
Mark’s
work has appeared in National Geographic Traveler, Robb Report, Men’s Journal,
Art & Antiques, the Continental and Ritz-Carlton magazines, Arizona
Highways and Newsmax. He is the author of Iconic Spirits: An Intoxicating
History (Lyons Press, 2012) and Moonshine Nation: The Art of Creating Cornbread
in a Bottle (Lyons Press, 2014). His first novel, Friend of the Devil, is
published by Black Opal Books.
Website: http://www.markspivakbooks.com
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Many thanks for hosting me on your blog today. I look forward to meeting readers and answering any questions they might have.
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